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[LSDJ] Super Flying Ice Cream Truck 2: Even Truckier

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[LSDJ] Super Flying Ice Cream Truck 2: Even Truckier

By powersupply on Oct 22, 2015 9:09 pm

Remake of one of my first songs. 1xLSDJ

Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/powersupply-1

Bandcamp: https://powersupply1.bandcamp.com/album … e-yourself

This submission is licensed by author under CC Attribution Noncommercial No Derivative Works (BY-NC-ND)

Member has requested constructive criticism

this one's even truckier

@Tiger
Thanks! This is really helpful stuff. I really appreciate you taking the time to write it!

Strong melody & harmonies. Solid beat.

-The drums never change throughout the song. Try experimenting with some varied beats.

-The opening of the song with each instrument being introduced one at a time is a bit of a cliche. It works here to some degree but I would experiment with different ways to open.

These criticisms are offered with respect. You have a good track man. Best of luck.

@Zack
Thanks! And of course, how would be called "super" without them?

@marcb0t
Thank you! I appreciate that you noticed that C:

Oh, also, I don't have any criticism. sad  I think this track is pretty good and solid! Sorry about that. wink

I like the fact that you use your pulse channels for drums and bassline, and the WAVE channel for harmonic accompaniment. This is opposite of how most people do it, and I applaud you for that... hehe. smile

By the way, this track sounds like the style of various chip artists from the Netherlands (Finland, Norway, etc.) And I do like that style. It's just real happy and laid back in terms of melodic structures.

This flying super truck's weapons are vanilla cannons right? haha. Anyway nice journeyful tune. big_smile

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