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ChipMusic.org / Music / powersupply's music / [LSDJ] Super Flying Ice Cream Truck 2: Even Truckier
Remake of one of my first songs. 1xLSDJ
Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/powersupply-1
Bandcamp: https://powersupply1.bandcamp.com/album … e-yourself
This submission is licensed by author under CC Attribution Noncommercial No Derivative Works (BY-NC-ND)
Member has requested constructive criticism
@Tiger
Thanks! This is really helpful stuff. I really appreciate you taking the time to write it!
Strong melody & harmonies. Solid beat.
-The drums never change throughout the song. Try experimenting with some varied beats.
-The opening of the song with each instrument being introduced one at a time is a bit of a cliche. It works here to some degree but I would experiment with different ways to open.
These criticisms are offered with respect. You have a good track man. Best of luck.
@Zack
Thanks! And of course, how would be called "super" without them?
@marcb0t
Thank you! I appreciate that you noticed that C:
Oh, also, I don't have any criticism. 
I think this track is pretty good and solid! Sorry about that. 
I like the fact that you use your pulse channels for drums and bassline, and the WAVE channel for harmonic accompaniment. This is opposite of how most people do it, and I applaud you for that... hehe. 
By the way, this track sounds like the style of various chip artists from the Netherlands (Finland, Norway, etc.) And I do like that style. It's just real happy and laid back in terms of melodic structures.
This flying super truck's weapons are vanilla cannons right? haha. Anyway nice journeyful tune. 
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